The shifting tone of the ledger entries tracks his growing obsession. 🚀 How to Implement It
Have the General say one thing, while the ledger shows he meant the opposite.
Side-bar notes showing the General's true intentions for a mission. Bound to the General by Selina Storm
A list of things he has sacrificed, including personal feelings.
Start each chapter with a brief, cold military log entry. The shifting tone of the ledger entries tracks
It creates a "ticking clock" feeling as the protagonist uncovers hidden agendas.
Portions of text "blacked out" that are revealed as the protagonist gains his trust. Bound to the General by Selina Storm
This is an interactive, "living" document or hidden epistolary element within the story that tracks the General’s private observations versus his public commands.